Standard (EADGBE)

From the top to the bottom

(Bottom to top I stop)

At the core I’ve forgotten

(In the middle of my thoughts)

Taken far from my safety

(The picture is there)

The memory won’t escape me

(But why should I care)

Repeat Intro

First verse

Play these chords-

There’s a place so dark you can’t see the end

Skies cock back and shock that which can’t defend

The rain then sends dripping an acidic question

Forcefully, the power of suggestion

Then with the eyes shut looking thought the rust and rot

And dust a small spot of light floods the floor

And pours over the rusted world of pretend

The eyes ease open and its dark again

Repeat Intro

Chorus

In the memory you’ll find me

Eyes burning up

The darkness holding me tightly

Until the sun rises up

2nd verse

Moving all around screaming of the ups and downs

Pollution manifested in perpetual sound

The wheels go round and the sunset creeps behind

Street lamps, chain-link and concrete

A little piece of paper with a picture drawn floats

On down the street till the wind is gone

The memory now is like the picture was then

When the paper’s crumpled up it can’t be perfect again

Repeat Intro

Chorus

In the memory you’ll find me

Eyes burning up

The darkness holding me tightly

Until the sun rises up

Bridge

Now you got me caught in the act

You bring the thought back

I’m telling you that

I see it right through you

Chorus

In the memory you’ll find me

Eyes burning up

The darkness holding me tightly

Until the sun rises up

Outro

In the memory you'll find me

Eyes burning up

The darkness holding me tightly

Until the sun rises up

There you go. I beg of you to give me corrections

for the bridge because it is a little off.

Corrections for the verses would also be nice.

Other than that, I think it sounds pretty good. Hope you like it!